Your Poems & Songs Forum Thread, Blue Maze in Mental Illness & Depression Forum; Blue Maze
Written by Lauren Smith
September 30, 2010
Glazed and dazed I stand in this maze
Bruised, confused – ...
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October 8th, 2010, 8:02 AM
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Blue Maze
Blue Maze
Written by Lauren Smith
September 30, 2010
Glazed and dazed I stand in this maze
Bruised, confused – Not sure where to move
Merely existing, vacantly wasting away
never tasting an end to this feud
Oh, to pop the bubble and master this puzzle
I find to be such trouble
Want to end this terrible game
I don’t wish to play
All a fluster trapped in a cluster
of deep-blue feelings
No strength to muster the courage to feel
The strength to heal
It leaves me now
to crawl on the ground
and avoid the tumble
to solve this jumble
Winding my way through the
quirky, murky haze
I fear to stay……
Will ever I know a brighter day?
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January 27th, 2011, 2:47 PM
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February 24th, 2011, 10:53 PM
#3
Re: Blue Maze
Very pretty.
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April 7th, 2011, 11:54 AM
#4
Re: Blue Maze
Wonderful poem. You have a special talent.
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February 24th, 2012, 4:14 AM
#5
Re: Blue Maze
Ya that's a great one.you have great talent. I wish you best of luck for the future.Thanks for sharing.
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