One Minute More

[crazybirdlady]

One Minute More

The sky is a little darker to me tonight
And the lights are a little dimmer without you
The moon is a little smaller at that height
My walk a little longer and harder to do
My home is a little farther away
The tunnels are a little deeper
And the mountains are a little higher today
The waves are getting a little steeper
Each tree seems a little taller than the last
And my path seems a little bit tougher
My eyes a little more teary than the past
My chest is a little tighter as I suffer
My heart is a little heavier without you
And my pain a little sharper than before
I wish I knew what I could do
To see you one minute more

By Me

[Blue]

Beautiful ... don't forget there is always a Light at the end of the tunnel! Don't despair! No matter where you are, every day, someone who loves you will be thinking of you.

Be strong!

x

One Minute More

The sky is a little darker to me tonight
And the lights are a little dimmer without you
The moon is a little smaller at that height
My walk a little longer and harder to do
My home is a little farther away
The tunnels are a little deeper
And the mountains are a little higher today
The waves are getting a little steeper
Each tree seems a little taller than the last
And my path seems a little bit tougher
My eyes a little more teary than the past
My chest is a little tighter as I suffer
My heart is a little heavier without you
And my pain a little sharper than before
I wish I knew what I could do
To see you one minute more

By Me

[Domicile of Madness]

Wow, poems don't usually make me be so... emotionally attached. It's amazing, thank you. <3

[golfrun]

i love your poem personaly i write poems to 95% i coposed in deppression or mainia state im hurting really bad and you know what you have the hang of how it REALLY feels to be deppressed i have cried for 5 hours strait, and my chest is really tight actually. i have just lost a loved one he was beaten to death on a house boat im trying to hold my tears back and my hurts back around others. i just need some one who understands obviously my family doesnt because they wont let me go to his memorial and its just passed but i knew about it when he died. i was not told till the day before he died in the icu and they wouldnt take me to see him that hurt really bad. someone just understand me please
Juanita golfrun

[Blue]

It is amazing how emotions can bring beautiful words to a poem.

[Protagonist]

very touching crazybirdlady...I am new to this site and I have wrote some poems...how do I join this group?